This is my response to the comment I received on another app on my haiku ‘yellow.’
So I posted my last haiku ‘yellow’ and this is the message I received:
‘Just saying bad words make you loom ignorant,(not sure if loom is a typo and should be seem?) Short, nice poem that would sound better without bad words.’
Ignorant: lacking in knowledge or training; unlearned: an ignorant man.
lacking knowledge or information as to a particular subject or fact: ignorant of quantum physics.
due to or showing lack of knowledge or training: an ignorant statement.
I did censor the word somewhat which I don’t always do. I will start posting warnings/ratings of bad language or scenes of violence etc where appropriate at the beginning of future poems/stories. Then you can decide if you want to continue to read the post.
I appreciate all the feedback I receive from everyone. All critique is good whether it’s positive or negative and you are all entitled to your opinion as am I.
I would say 90% of the people I know swear in everyday life or write swear words in their work at some point. Maybe I should get new friends! Bad influences the lot of them!
Anyway I’m not ignorant neither am I a genius. I never went to college or university but I’m certainly not stupid!
After thinking about the comment over a cup of coffee I decided it annoyed me a little, so here’s my comeback.
So I’m ignorant
Because I swore in my post?
Ha ha hypocrite!
Have a nice day/night! 🙂